Duality

your self portrait is way too dominant in this design. it's a big distraction and makes me look more at you than what your about. from the size of the font it seems as if thought your afraid to let people who you really are. the fonts are way too small and are hard to read also, they blend in too much with the dark grays and light grays and because of their size, it just seems like there are only clouds in the background and not words mixed in with them. I also dont understand the thick awkward black like than runs down from the edges of the speakers. if your an artist, i would suggest you put art on top and make it bigger because it is a big a part of you. you also made "family" very discreet which is sad. all your words are so small and not legible. your colors are also flat and have no depth. the whole piece isn't deep enough to suggest that it's a self portrait. good work other wise.